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WAITING FOR THE ASHES (+audio by toxic-nebulae)

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The night engulfs her fleeting
paths, while crimson twilights
hover by her fingertips.

Then prowls the beast

her ashes waiting
to turn into fire

once more.


Frantz, january / february 2013



French freestyle version

Elle a
des crépuscules pourpres
s'attardant au bout des doigts
quelques lignes de fuite
englouties par
la nuit

Alors rôde la bête

de ses propres mains
il lui faut tourner encor
les cendres

en feu
:new: listen it, read by lady :heart: :icontoxic-nebulae: :heart: [link]

Simple lines direct from the heart - take these as they are. Directly writing in english by me. Reread and arranged by =Wordeea :rose:
I try to write something simple with multiple possibilities of meaning. English process is for me very useful, I cannot "think" every word, sonority and meaning as in french. But I make many mistakes in the expression...

:rose:

This is also the daily poetry, number 32, for #Glory-Be-Project

:bulletblue: Version française libre - sans trop de rigueur, qui laisse être...
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Octocolombus's avatar
Belle image ! L'atmosphère est bien étrange :)