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Au mieux de ses racines
Le pin s'incline
et rompt
nous mourons tous perclus de liens invisibles
quand le vent nous appelle
At most granted by its roots
leans the pine and
gives way
we all die crippled by invisible bonds
when the wind calls us
English version 2
Yielding to its finest roots
the pine bows
and breaks away
we all die crippled by invisible bonds
when summoned by the wind
Frantz, 15 janvier/january 15 - 2013.
English version 2 by Nikki
Le pin s'incline
et rompt
nous mourons tous perclus de liens invisibles
quand le vent nous appelle
At most granted by its roots
leans the pine and
gives way
we all die crippled by invisible bonds
when the wind calls us
English version 2
Yielding to its finest roots
the pine bows
and breaks away
we all die crippled by invisible bonds
when summoned by the wind
Frantz, 15 janvier/january 15 - 2013.
English version 2 by Nikki
Miss 
send me today her own version - I loved it. Published with her permission
- write one poetry per day!Translation by me
Note - in french, I perfectly masters the absence of punctuation in regard of the rhythm. In the translation, I make a "copy-pasted" - but I'm not absolutely sure about the effect. Dont hesitate to tell me if it's inappropriate. Thx
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Intense and fascinating piece of poetry as always!! Your wonderful work has been featured in my journal: [link] 